It is important to be bothered by unfortunate events because when we get bothered by them, that’s when we put in our 100% effort to make these things right. For example if other people are bothered by something, but you are not, it’s a lot harder for you to "understand" the pain the others are going through. However, if you yourself are "bothered, uncomfortable, and uneasy", this is when you choose to help solve this situation. When these events get under OUR skin that’s really, truly, when we do everything we can do to make a difference.
good job akash this is very good
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing I really like the way you relate it to the audience to say like if your uncomfortable then you gotta fix it. Do you think there's anything to improve your writing
ReplyDeleteIt is true that when you are truly bothered by something, you do your best effort to change it. Great job Akash.
ReplyDeletenice job akash what are you bothered by?
ReplyDeleteHey Kyle, By the way great job on oyur blog too. I'm Specifically bothered that kids don't know where there next meal is coming from.
DeleteI like your vocabulary and how you explained your reasonings. 1one question I have is that have you ever been bothered by anything in specific?
ReplyDeleteNice Job on your blog Rohit! One thing I'm specifically bothered by would be that some kids don't know where there next meal is coming from.
DeleteI agree
Deletegreat job!
I agree
Deletegreat job!
This comment has been removed by the author.
ReplyDeleteGood job Akash i agree like how you made it very specific. What are you bothered by?
ReplyDeleteI think that you wrote your post very well but what specifically are you bothered by?
ReplyDeleteGreat job Akash. I totally agree!!
ReplyDeleteI agree Akash! When you feel the pain to, that motivates you to do something.
ReplyDelete